I loved the animation but...
It is very lacking at the end. I know you had to rush for the deadline, but that still doesn't make it right to cut it like that.
I can understand why you chose to have the fish eaten, but why didn't you have him get flushed down the toilet, or eaten by a cat? That, to me, would make more sense.
I hope you have plans of fixing this later. If you do be sure to make it a tad longer and have the ending make more sense.
Also, to me, the "FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU" thing is extremely old. ^^;;; I've seen it everywhere and it just isn't funny.
7/10 for overall story improvement (Good luck by the way!)
5/5 because I liked everything but the ending. :3